Friday, June 26, 2009

Boot Camp II, Assignment 1: Results

I have now been through the 700+ photos that were submitted for SCBII's first assignment enough times to be thoroughly sick of every single photo in the pile.

Kidding.

They are great. But I did go through them a lot.

A few standouts, some notes and a lucky winner -- inside.
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First of all, it was neat to see so many people go to the effort to talk someone into letting you photograph them. I know this was not easy for many of you, and I hope it ended up being a growth experience. It was also great to see so many of your faces, and I will admit to that being an ulterior motive of the second portion of the assignment.

Second, I was impressed with the sheer number of photos that would have looked right at home in A-list magazines -- including more than a few potential covers. Bearing in mind that most of the readers of this site are amateurs, that rocks.

Now the hard part -- picking a winner. It is, of course, subjective. And any of at least a hundred photos in the stack could just as easily been featured here today. I had time to leave some notes on a few pictures -- although not much, as we are both finishing up moving and closing on the old house this week. (Kinda crazy around here.)

That said, I pulled up some entries to talk about and use as examples. I hope you will indulge how personal (and, thus, seemingly arbitrary) picture editing can be. The important thing is that so many of you jumped right into the deep end.

And, hopefully, benefitted from the experience.

Some of the photos below are dual-pic composites, others have the photographer's headshot in a nearby frame in their Flickr stream.

As always, click on the pic to see it bigger and see who shot it. And please take a moment to leave a note under your fave.

Enough yapping. On with the photos, and the reasons they stood out to me.
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Because looked like it jumped off of the pages of WIRED Magazine.

Because of the DIY biz-card gobo on the key.

Because of the in-focus background that could have been a weird distraction, but instead carried the shadows from the low-fill in a cool way.

Because the photog shot his recently unemployed dad, which probably injected a fun, purposeful shooting session / family activity into a stressful period.


Because of the impish expression on the subject's (top) face.

Because of the use of graphic lines and color.

Because of the inclusion of background context while still keeping a headshot framing. The photo has layers of of interest.

Because of the confidence exuded by the subject -- he looks like he is ready to take on the world.


Because of the inclusion of vocation-specific background, but not in a way that hammers you over the head.

Because the lighting is simple, elegant and does not call attention to itself.

Because the subject exudes professionalism and warmth -- her expression makes her look like someone you would want to work with.

Because the composition -- including contextual background -- is still tight enough to work as a Facebook and/or LinkedIn avatar and still be readable. The photo can be used in a variety of ways.


Because of the strong graphic quality.

Because of the quirky expression.

Because of the creative use of a light modifier as a quickie background.

Because of how the high-key, airy exposure brings the whole picture together.


Because he placed the subject on a background that many people miss as they are walking around on their background looking for a background.

Because of the way the expression, hair, grass and everything work together.

Because of the composition that makes the flower in the ground look as if it is in her hair.

Because the shooting angle allowed the photog to use an umbrella as key and the cloudy, overhead fill as a huge, on-axis softbox.


Because of the intensity.

Because of the tight crop, which adds to the above.

Because of the keyboard reflection being pulled off very well in the curved glasses. Not novel, but done very well.

Because of how the B&W conversion added to the simplicity of the photo.


Because the subject (left) oozes cool.

Because of how well the specular highlights were handled with the glasses.

Because of the color palette and tonal range. The internal separation is great -- the face works perfectly against the background.

Because how many sons can pull off a photo of their dad that "oozes cool" on Father's Day?


Because of the expression and connection in the subject (left).

Because of the lighting.

Because the background, which at first seemed too busy, is actually composed of the DIY crafts the subject makes.

Because of the diagonal crop to the headshot.


Because of the well-executed profile lighting. (Lighting from a little behind the subject, as here, is a better bet than straight-on profile light.)

Because of the expression and moment.

Because of the photographer seeing the design on the background and using it to add a dynamic element in what could have been a static photo.


Because of the composition of the subject (left) and how well it works with the lighting.

Because of the distillation of the photo that happens with the conversion to B&W.

Because of the connection between the subject and the viewer -- and how well the two brothers' photos go together. Probably not a bad thing to pull together a few days before Father's Day.

Because most brothers I knew at this age could not stop beating each other up long enough to pull of two photos like this.
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So, there are a few sweet examples in a huge field of entries, many of which could have just as easily been on this page.

To see a slideshow of all of the entries, settle into a very comfortable chair, grab some caffeine and click here.

Oh, yeah -- and to see which one of these photographers has won the Speedlight Pro Kit, the Strobist Lighting DVDs and the Trade Secret Cards for the first assignment from SBCII: Click here.

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45 Comments:

Anonymous David Coe said...

What a fantastic competition... I really enjoyed it and thought the winner was thoroughly deserving. I look forward to assignment 2.

June 26, 2009 5:39 PM  
Blogger Kyle said...

thanks david, i'm honored to be on here. mine is the white background. congratulations to tom.

June 26, 2009 5:43 PM  
Blogger Jerome Love said...

What an awesome set a finalists! Congrats to the TDN on the win!

June 26, 2009 5:50 PM  
Anonymous Dennis DIxson said...

That must have been a tough choice, almost as bad as trying to decide which kind of pie to have after dinner. They all look so temptingly good.

June 26, 2009 5:56 PM  
Anonymous Cjris said...

top choice! Goes to show that the edit is a huge part of a togs job, and you obviously do it very well.

June 26, 2009 6:17 PM  
Blogger Kevin said...

I am in the same boat as Kyle - honored to have been mentioned in the results (the Brothers photo). Thank you for all of your hard work among your busy move.

Looking forward to assignment #2!

-Kevin

June 26, 2009 6:37 PM  
Blogger Christopher said...

decision anxiously awaited. Not disappointed!! when do we get assignment II?

June 26, 2009 6:43 PM  
Anonymous notagoodtodo said...

Excellent article! It really was helpful for you to post the photos with comments. More like this please!

June 26, 2009 7:02 PM  
Blogger powderdrop said...

Thank you! The hands-on experience and then seeing all of the results of others doing the same is the purest form of learning.

June 26, 2009 7:05 PM  
Blogger John said...

It was a fun challenge! I'm definitely looking forward to the next one.

I also thought it was cool that you picked out some of the shots that were my favorites too.

June 26, 2009 7:08 PM  
Blogger DVillanuevaPhotography said...

great! i love your site and sharing of your vast knowledge. i just jumped on this week so i need to catch up. waiting for assignment 2 :)

June 26, 2009 8:04 PM  
Anonymous caprae said...

Most excellent. Learned a lot from looking at other's images. Congratulations to all of the top finalists. Looking forward to part II with a vengeance! :)

June 26, 2009 8:06 PM  
Blogger Alex said...

Great choices, many were on my list as well. I really enjoyed participating in this for this first time. Keep up the great work.

June 26, 2009 8:41 PM  
Anonymous Ranger 9 said...

I'm sorry, but I think the two near-misses in the previous post were better than any of these.

These are all obvious "good" photos, but the throw-outs went a bit beyond the norm..

June 26, 2009 9:48 PM  
Blogger JimC said...

Great shots - glad I didn't have to pick a winner!

June 26, 2009 9:56 PM  
Blogger David said...

Yes, Ranger, I agree with you that they were very strong shots. Which is why I pulled them up into their own post even though they did not fit the confines of the assignment.

June 26, 2009 10:06 PM  
Blogger Tom said...

I can hardly believe it... as far as confidence boosts go, this one is off the charts :)

I really enjoyed the assignment, as well as seeing the diversity of quality entries!

I'm done euphorically dancing around the apartment now, time to celebrate with a comfortable chair, that slideshow, and a nice cold one :) (too late for cafeïne ;) )

here's to you guys! cheers!

Tom (TDN)

June 26, 2009 10:20 PM  
Blogger Siddharth said...

Thanks David! Absolute honor to be posted here (the one with the laptop background)...Thanks for sharing all that amazing knowledge with us...

June 26, 2009 10:22 PM  
Anonymous zemlin said...

The time you spent reviewing all the shots is greatly appreciated - clearly you were rushed because you must have overlooked mine :-P

Thanks for all you do to nurture a www of photographers.

June 26, 2009 10:24 PM  
Blogger Bugi said...

I had a blast doing this assignment! Even though mine did not make the Results post (it did make the final cut though) I think I, and all the others still learned a ton from this. Thanks David!

After using a snoot as fill for my entry, I think I'm digging the 2 snooted flash Nick turpin style for portraits. I hope the next assignment gets posted soon!

June 26, 2009 11:08 PM  
Anonymous CortexForce said...

Great contest, excellent entries, congrats for all of you, especially in the top ten! I learned a lot and I still feel like

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yIutgtzwhAc

after getting into the top stack being new to off cam flash. :)

David, big thank you for the whole project, looking forward to the next asignment!

June 27, 2009 3:31 AM  
Anonymous zemlin said...

I also wanted to add a "Congratulations!" to all the top shots posted here. Great Stuff,folks!

June 27, 2009 6:09 AM  
Blogger Barnacle said...

thanks for the assingment, and congrats to the winner!!
excited about the next one!

June 27, 2009 8:39 AM  
Blogger Hipporage said...

Congratulations Tom, and Thank you so much David. I would not have taken such a picture ("the WIRED one") if it weren't for all this site has taught me.

June 27, 2009 10:22 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Firstly, a huge thank you to you David for putting many hours of your time into looking at the images.

I was a little disappointed that so many didn't get into the spirit of the assignment and find an appropriate model. It's just too easy to shoot close friends and family with the do again possibilities. I realize that several had family and close friends in recession hit unemployment which is fair enough.

Having said that, the quality of the results is amazing. I struggled to find an image that I could call bad, or indeed worse than mine =O

Well done to the short listed, highlighted above and overall winner.

Bill

June 27, 2009 10:25 AM  
Anonymous Liisa said...

Thanks! Even though I didn't win I feel like winner. :)

June 27, 2009 12:33 PM  
Blogger BTS Photography said...

Tons of great images. It shows how well David's Strobist techniques have taken off.

Congrats to the winners

June 27, 2009 1:01 PM  
Anonymous David said...

This was great! Thanks. I learned a lot. The best part is the fact that it got me off my butt and behind the camera. It gave me the incentive to put into action and try out all that I read in Lighting 101.

June 27, 2009 2:19 PM  
Blogger Debbi_in_California said...

Ok, the mother is coming out in me, but what I learned from this is not one person was eliminated for not following your rules.

Rule one headshot, check,

Rule Two, Place two photos together

Rule Three hold one finger up in your own headshot. What's the point of making rules to begin with Mr Stobie?

No sour grapes here as I didn't enter. But I was curious when I saw so many entries not do as you asked.
What a crock! LOL or did you change the rules midstream?

Debbi

June 27, 2009 2:41 PM  
Anonymous Myron said...

Great student shots rely upon a great teacher.

Good work David

What's up for #2?

June 27, 2009 4:57 PM  
Blogger David said...

Oh, for Pete's sake, Debbi.

One, I clearly stated the workaround for people who did not have access to the software to make a two-up photo. Many people did just that.

Two, the finger rule is only needed for the winner to verify he/she shot it after the assignment was made.

June 27, 2009 5:09 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Is this the only blog in the world not reporting Michael Jackson news?


C'mon David pull out something about the King of Pop us strobie kids can use or remember about.


What about the time you had five minutes to shoot MJ and your speedlite batteries all died at the same time so he told you to beat it.

Or I am getting you confused with John Harrington?

June 27, 2009 5:18 PM  
Blogger David said...

Sorry. Next door down. You want WTJ.

June 27, 2009 5:36 PM  
Blogger Hub of Photography said...

Congrats David for the great participation and results!

On behalf of Speedlight Prokit team, we'd like to thank you and honored to be part of this fantastic Boot Camp II!

Congrats go out to all the talented photographers! You guys are great and cool!

Regards,
Sam Poon

June 27, 2009 9:10 PM  
Blogger Kevin Housen said...

David-

Thanks for the interesting assignment and plowing through all of the images, which I’m sure was a lot of work. I learned a lot from it and from looking through the other entries.

I went into this thinking mostly about the technical aspects of the lighting and making best use of what was available. After submitting my shot, I looked through all 700+ entries. After the first hundred or so I found myself sorting them into mental piles of really good, average, etc – but only partly based on the lighting, background, contrast, etc. The other part was whether the subject was either attractive in some way, or had an interesting expression. The lighting, background, contrast and so on were also important, but it made me realize the obvious fact that a compelling picture needs a compelling subject as well as good lighting. OK, so maybe I’m a slow learner.

I thought your comments on the top 10 were interesting. About 1/3 of your comments had to do with the expression on the subjects face. And that got me to thinking about how one gets a compelling portrait.

When you’re shooting someone you have a lot of control over the light, but how do you (or do you?) control the expression? How does one elicit the slightly stiff, almost stoic look on the subjects face in Toni.R’s very nice image of the girl in the beach chair, the “impish grin” in Lilsa Salonen’s shot, or the quirky expression and amazing eyes in Kyle Jackson’s image?

The technical aspects of lighting are covered nicely in the L101 and 102 series, and in your workshop DVDs. But what about the other part? Or is that what you meant when you say its important to keep the subject engaged? I thought you meant keep talking so they don’t get bored. But is there more to it? Now when I see a compelling portrait I wonder how much was due to the skill of the photographer and how much was due to the innate appearance of the subject. And I thought all we had to learn was the lighting!

My father, now gone, was a photographer in Oregon who ran his own studio. He won numerous awards for his portraits of people that would be otherwise quite ordinary if you met them on the street. Unfortunately, I didn’t have the photography bug at the time and so didn’t make the effort to learn his techniques. So, I’m learning as much as I can from the strobist community. Great resource!

thanks
kevin

June 27, 2009 11:41 PM  
Anonymous MicroMixx said...

your collection is very much interesting!!

June 28, 2009 12:15 AM  
Anonymous Boston Photographer-MWynne said...

I first found this blog about a year and half ago I think. The first post I read fascinated me, and the on assignment section added to my bag of tricks with almost every article I read. The following here may be mostly amateurs, but the education could be beneficial to a lot of pros.

The work shown in this post is impressive no matter what you guys call yourselves. The skill level is here and from what I have read in the past I would say a lot of it comes from reading this blog.

Great work to the shooters, and thanks for sharing.

June 28, 2009 9:24 AM  
Anonymous Daniel said...

First of all, thank you for sharing your knowledge and inspire us, and putting many hours of your time into the contest.

Even though mine did not make the Results post (but was a finalist though) I really enjoyed the assignment, and looking forward to the next one!

Daniel

flickr

June 28, 2009 12:05 PM  
Anonymous Elisa said...

This is why I love this blog. Its readers are uber talented, and seeing their work inspires me and gives me something to strive for.

June 28, 2009 11:15 PM  
Blogger Eff Emm 2 said...

Great series of Photo's. Awesome top 10. Great Challenge and now for the next assignment.

June 29, 2009 2:17 AM  
Blogger Heipel said...

Here I was using the excuse that I'm moving across the country for not finding the time to complete the (much anticipated by me)boot camp assignment. And the darn organizer and judge is moving too AND still went through 700 photographs!

Love that you're doing the bootcamp thing. Next assignment I'm armed with "my dog ate it" excuses if I need them! :)

Thanks for your work and site, as usual, David.

June 29, 2009 10:57 AM  
Anonymous moritz said...

Been thinking again about all the questions/comments concerning the (exact) rules for taking part in the SBC II and eventually winning anything. I am surprised the rules are an issue so much discussed - I mean, what could possibly go wrong if you don't obey the rules? You don't win anything? I guess the cool prizes are more like an extra motivation for thinking up something super-duper creative and then delivering something that even just a little bit cooler than what you have thought up. Possibly even by bending the rules a bit. It's not like anybody has a contract here. If you don't have fun without winning something or getting featured by Mr. H. you are probably in the wrong place anyway. (plus: how boring would it be to have DH feature all the photographers that have obeyed the rules the best :)
After all, this whole bootcamp is a huge present to anybody willing to take part (and only to those, Debbi). But probably to the majority here this is clear anyway and I am just ranting away a little bit.

June 29, 2009 11:25 AM  
Anonymous Tommy said...

Very good start to Bootcamp 2.....great images and I am glad I don't have to choose the winner....looking forward to the next assignment..

June 29, 2009 3:34 PM  
Blogger Nick said...

Wow! There are a ton of great photos that were submitted to the group for this assignment. I can't believe that you took that time to look though them all that is awesome! I really wish that I had the time to participate in this assignment.

June 30, 2009 12:28 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I turned in assignment 1 and when the results were released I played the slide show, my entery is not there!!!! What coud have gone wrong? Please help! Now all I want is to see Assignment 2

Jim

July 01, 2009 11:24 AM  

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