Thursday, June 25, 2009

Two Photos that were Tough to Toss

Boot Camp II Assignment #1 yielded over over seven hundred entries, which I have thus far winnowed down to a baker's dozen. It is getting very difficult to edit them any further.

At this point, I have to look hard to find reasons to knock photos out. I just dropped two photos for no other reason than they are not really headshots. But they were both so beautiful I wanted to stick them up on the site and show them off -- and help me procrastinate a little longer in picking a winner.

One of them would look right at home in the NYT Sunday Mag, the other is an art photo mag cover waiting to happen.

Too loose to win, too good to throw away -- after the jump.
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Beautiful Look in Horrible Light

Jerome Love's photo of "Thulani," a youth program director in Soweto, South Africa is a wonderful example of how bad midday light can be finessed with small flashes. (Click the pic for bigger.)

If you look at the area in the right of the frame, you can see what ambient Jerome was dealing with. So he worked the shadow side of a building to build his light in the shade. He cheated the building a little to use the sun as a rim. This added a nice layer of texture to the portrait.

He used two bare SB-28s. The lack of a mod helps in the light output department. The key was high camera right, at 1/4 power, zoomed to 85mm throw. The fill was on the ground in front (on the vertical lens axis) and was set to 1/8.

Note that the key was upper camera right -- same side as the rim. This little departure from convention always adds a different feel to a lit portrait.


Bad ambient light: Free.
Two SB-28s: About $200.00.
Owning midday with two small flashes: Priceless.



I Can't Stop Looking at This One

Toni.R's timeless portrait of her 14-year-old daughter works even before the addition of the seagull, which is posed so perfectly it looks like a suspended movie prop.

The lighting is simple -- a bare SB-26, dialed way down, from camera left. It is working against the sun, which comes from camera right. (Check out the gull for ambient-only light.) Toni's light modifier -- a Tupperware bowl -- was rendered inoperative when it was accidently mistaken for the coleslaw dish.

I'll bet that never happens to Annie.
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These both had beautiful light, interesting composition and an atypical look. But beyond that there was a strong connection between the subject and the viewer in each portrait.

While both of these photos were technically not headshots, they get the highest compliment I can give a photo -- that I really wish I had taken them.

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42 Comments:

Blogger Winged Power Photography said...

Dang, those are just amazing and so visually compelling! I've got so much more to learn... like how to control those strobes... Amazing!

June 25, 2009 12:43 AM  
Blogger Ori W. said...

I like them both, but the seagull one is awesome.

June 25, 2009 12:58 AM  
Anonymous Andrew A said...

those look incredible. Good luck trying to choose a winner

June 25, 2009 2:23 AM  
Blogger Bugi said...

These are really magnificent shots. The first one could really be a front page cover for a book or even a newspaper. Makes me feel bad, since my photo is one of the finalist, and it's not even nearly as cool as these two.

www.blueweedphoto.blogspot.com

June 25, 2009 2:49 AM  
Blogger alastair said...

Phenomenal shots, both; it's easy to look at these and think, "Gosh, if only I..." - well done to both parties!

June 25, 2009 2:56 AM  
Anonymous Thomas van Ardenne said...

Great photos indeed! I especially like the latter; great timing. Besides the winning photo, I'm also very curious to your 'dozen' photos you filtered from the large pool.

June 25, 2009 5:34 AM  
Anonymous Fkrny said...

thanks for good article
i love photos

June 25, 2009 6:43 AM  
Blogger Charles Verghese said...

I am sorry that I couldn't do this assignment....My official excuse is that I was offline for about 20 days!! Thanks to our wonderful ISP (Etisalat in the UAE/Dubai).

Hope to make it for the next assignment.

Lovely photos though

Charles

June 25, 2009 6:53 AM  
Anonymous Joseph Farrugia said...

Awe inspiring photos.....that are well-lit; & with simple setups.....we have no excuses now :)

June 25, 2009 8:09 AM  
Blogger paul said...

Can I be the first to congratulate you on the Annie joke? Had me chuckling into my lunchtime cup of tea...

June 25, 2009 8:28 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Totally agree. If I saw either of these hanging in a museum/gallery I would stop to look at them vs just a quick glance and on to the next one. I was especially intrigued with the beach shot and wondered how many images were shot to get that one seagull just right in the image. If this isn't hanging up at least three feet tall in the house then something is wrong.

June 25, 2009 8:42 AM  
Blogger John said...

Both of these are striking images! Glad you spotted them and gave the photographers credit for their work.

June 25, 2009 9:26 AM  
Anonymous Gordon Saunders said...

Both are fine shots but the second, with the seagull, is in a higher league. Top quality lighting, strong composition, engagement with the viewer and humour. Can't ask for much more.

June 25, 2009 9:46 AM  
Anonymous Hurtig said...

These are truly outstanding photos and really inspired me. If for any reason I could constantly produce results like this, I would start to feel like a real photographer.

June 25, 2009 9:54 AM  
Anonymous Alex said...

I love the way the lighting handles the skin tones in the first shot. Quite beautiful. Seconding David's comment, the combination of fill and the natural hair-light on the subject's left side (the right from our perspective) is also nicely done. I will have to try that out.

June 25, 2009 10:09 AM  
Blogger GeoWulf said...

Oh, you mean the seagull's chest wasn't supposed to be a bounce fill?

Great images!!

June 25, 2009 11:14 AM  
Anonymous Jayne said...

I love the gull shot. The color and the birds, I sort of wish the girl wasn't as stiff looking. Great shot though, if she's 14 it kind of works!

June 25, 2009 11:19 AM  
Blogger murman said...

I hope you post a link to the bakers dozen.

June 25, 2009 11:26 AM  
Anonymous Chicago photographer said...

Lovin' the gull shot.

June 25, 2009 11:40 AM  
Anonymous Boston Photographer-MWynne said...

The second photographs has a great look to it. The light quality variation between the background and the subject hits you over the head but it works. Great photos.

June 25, 2009 12:06 PM  
Blogger Jerome Love said...

Thank you for the short write up! I'm floored by the feedback!

Best

Jerome
www.jeromelove.net
www.jeromelovesyou.com

June 25, 2009 12:37 PM  
Anonymous caprae said...

Yes, both stopped me when looking through these. If that beach chair isn't hanging on their wall at life size then something is wrong. Love it.

June 25, 2009 1:57 PM  
Anonymous Burgtender said...

Both were absolutely amazing! Great use of lighting technique.

June 25, 2009 2:45 PM  
Anonymous moritz said...

@ Jayne: Can't agree about the "stiff looking" bit - I think her posture adds a great deal to the beautiful eerie atmosphere that's being created by the "Jaws"-like beach and the "Birds"-like seagull :)

June 25, 2009 3:31 PM  
Blogger Christopher said...

Wow, David,
Strobist is an awesome movement and you appear to be reaching guru status!! I hope that the strobist continues on, it has captured my interest and is dragging me kicking and screaming to the next level of photography.
My one request would be that you give us another go at the headshot at some point. I spent several nights looking over the entries and thinking of how I could improve mine and I know that I have learned a ton just through the process.
Can't wait to see who made the final cut. This almost feels like an episode of "So you think you can dance?"

June 25, 2009 3:56 PM  
Anonymous brett said...

To bad the first one didn't make the cut. My assumption in reading the directions was to shoot a head shot of someone relating to the field they were trying to find work in. I racked my brain entirely to long for something worthwhile and cool but gave up in the end knowing the deadline was coming soon. Guess that comes from being a newspaper photog where, in my mind, headshot translates to environmental portrait.

June 25, 2009 3:59 PM  
Blogger Debbi_in_California said...

700? OMGOSH!!!
Debbi

June 25, 2009 4:16 PM  
Blogger John Classen said...

There are some great photographs that were submitted. I couldn't submit mine because well, none of the people I photographed were unemployed. The specs were, "Head shots of people who were unemployed". However, I have subsequently found two people who are and have a shoot scheduled with the one this coming Sunday evening and another with the 2nd person when I return from vacation. If nothing else, your challenge pushed me to push myself. Thanks!

PS. I'll post those photos when I've completed them.

John

June 25, 2009 4:37 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

John [Classen] - I'm pretty certain that "unemployed" was a suggestion, not a requirement. An excerpt from the assignment blog states:

"To be clear, you can choose anyone you want to photograph, and any person will be a valid subject for the assignment."

June 25, 2009 6:50 PM  
Anonymous Sasa said...

Very nice!

June 25, 2009 6:57 PM  
Anonymous ML said...

I found one of the baker's dozen on Flickr, and another by Google search. Will all thirteen be posted at some point? I feel like I could learn something from that gallery.

June 25, 2009 10:04 PM  
Anonymous juxta makeup said...

I'm with you on the beach shot. Would actually love to see more pics before the jump as well. Thanks for sharing!!

June 26, 2009 12:11 AM  
Blogger Kirk Lau said...

I really like Jerome's shot! and to some extend it does remotely resemble a headshot! great result, so little gear!

DH: will you post a link to the baker dozen?

June 26, 2009 1:44 AM  
Blogger Evbo said...

Ewwwww! The waiting is killing me! Mine made the finals and I can't wait to see which one he picks. Seeing what some of you guys have done I doubt mine has a snowballs chance in you know where. Congrats to everyone, there are some really great photos in the pool.

flickr

June 26, 2009 7:25 AM  
Blogger Joaquin said...

Beautiful shots, but I can't stop looking at the second shot, It really looks like a Salvador Dali painting, really beautiful. (I will sign up soon, thanks)

June 26, 2009 9:22 AM  
Blogger Ranger 9 said...

When you have to throw out a brilliant photo like #2 because it's "too loose," that's a sign that your criteria may be "too tight"!

Maybe these assignments need a salon des refusés...

June 26, 2009 10:09 AM  
Blogger Wayne said...

Off topic - congratulations for being named one of the Five Biggest Photographers on the Internet!

In fact, you are Number 1!

http://www.pdnonline.com/pdn/content_display/features/pdn-online/e3ida6dda5bd97c1167cc75653707522a00?pn=2

June 26, 2009 1:00 PM  
Anonymous BurgTender said...

As I said before, congrats for both of you! Your pictures are totally stunning :)

Can we see the dozen of finalist somewhere ?

Can't wait to see who will win... Can't believe that I'm in the dozen !

My picture on flickr

June 26, 2009 2:31 PM  
Blogger Kevin Mattingly said...

This is a great idea about the Frisbee
http://www.diyphotography.net/the-strobist-corner-protect-your-strobe-with-a-frisbee

June 26, 2009 2:49 PM  
Anonymous Aspen Photography said...

I'm definatley gonna have to try the next task. Good photos that have been chosen. Need to learn how to do all that. Great stuff.

June 26, 2009 3:05 PM  
Anonymous Daniel said...

Can't wait to see the final result.
After browsing through the submitted photos i've found 9 of the bakers dozen.
More than 700 shots and there are some really great ones.
It is good to be part of it.

Daniel

flickr

June 26, 2009 4:51 PM  
Blogger Jim Harvey said...

Seems to have gobbled up my previous post, but I will just re-iterate;

There needs to be a post that clearly explains what a "Head Shot" actually is. After looking over the hundreds of entries, it is apparent that there are a significant number of people who don't know.

If your subjects hips are showing, it's not a Head Shot...

June 26, 2009 5:14 PM  

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